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An Icky Love Poem by ~world-in-flames:iconworld-in-flames:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


I saw the way you looked at him.
I saw how you must have felt.
The surface of which I could barely skim
I saw how he could make your heart melt.

I sit on the sidelines, watching the game
Constantly yearning to be in his place
The way in which Fortune yearns for Fame
I wanted to see the desire on your face.

I don’t have much for you,
Only my heart, and soul, too
I’m not after your assets or looks,
I’m not like the guys in the books.

I want to be for you what is best,
I’ll look at your eyes, not at your chest
And tell you, being quite clear,
That I love you, and I am sincere.

But it wouldn’t ever end up that way,
All I can do is hope and pray
That you will finally see one day
I am one that can love you that way.
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Author's Comments

Another damn love poem. They never end, I SWEAR TO GOD *rips out hair* ....OW!

Comment plz! ^^'

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~13Gaara Jul 5, 2008, 6:18:40 PM
i love it. i think it has so much feeling in it!

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Mood: Speechless ~tcoimbra Jul 5, 2008, 6:19:15 PM
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Great ;)

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~YamiYaoi Jul 5, 2008, 6:30:14 PM
Sounds like the type of guy I'm looking for. One that would look me in the eyes rather than the chest. *sighs* Oh well...

This is a great poem!!! Keep writing!!!
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~world-in-flames Jul 5, 2008, 7:46:16 PM
:D' thanks! there's few of our kind out there, right? ^^'

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~world-in-flames Jul 5, 2008, 7:46:39 PM
^^ thankies

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~ViolentHysteria Jul 5, 2008, 7:46:42 PM
Ohhh jeez I know exactly how you feel with the 'love poems seem to not stop coming'

It happens with me a lot xDD

But this is fantastic!!! I feel relative, minus the fact it's girls XDD

I LOVE IT! :heart:

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~world-in-flames Jul 5, 2008, 7:47:05 PM
=D yeah, I put a lot into this one ^^

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~MaxTachin Jul 5, 2008, 7:53:05 PM
i get this one...

quite simple really

i like how it flows and its meaning is good

almost like you have what it takes to show this guy up,

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"If i could, i'd be with you right now, babe." He whispered to himself, hoping somehow she would hear, looking up at the same moon she was watching from so far away.

"i would be too.." she whispered back.
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~MaxTachin Jul 5, 2008, 7:53:38 PM
my love poems are usually angled negatively

=p

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"If i could, i'd be with you right now, babe." He whispered to himself, hoping somehow she would hear, looking up at the same moon she was watching from so far away.

"i would be too.." she whispered back.
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~world-in-flames Jul 5, 2008, 7:57:14 PM
^^' thanks! and yeah, that happens a lot right? there's always just a random flood of them, like "hey, here's some love poems you wrote. *WHAM!!!*"

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